niedziela, 4 marca 2018
Is it possible that we will stop being a throwaway society ?
Nowadays people got used to comfortable life and they don't want to think about consequences so it doesn't seem like it is going to change. We use a lot of things that are disposable and don't really care about eco-friendly stuff. Why ? Because normally they are more expensive and pretty hard to come by. Briefly, in summary, i therefore think that if something would not change people won't stop being a throwaway society.
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OdpowiedzUsuń1. "Why ?" - just give the answer!
2. "Briefly, in summary," - you've used 'therefore', which is enough to introduce the conclusion