poniedziałek, 10 grudnia 2018

Limerick 1 and 2

There was a man and he seemed really kind 
Life challenged him and tricked his mind 
He supposed to be sad 
Jealous people were mad 
He could appreciate life even he was blind 

There was a man laying on the floor 
He always used to be poor
But now things have changed 
Something is ticking strange 
Love knocked to his door 
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1 komentarz:

  1. englishdiary16 grudnia 2018 03:10

    Talk to me! There are some issues with rhythm in both of them but they can easily be sorted out. The more serious problem is rhyme: FLOOR and POOR don't rhyme.

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